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Feb 9, 2013, 1:10:28 PM
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Heroes Cotidianos1 by Benbe Heroes Cotidianos1 by Benbe
Pastel on wood 186 x 122 cms. ( new photo)
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:icontrebor-htiek:
First off i would like to say, amazing work, you have great skill.
So the first thing that sticks out to my eye is the hand, it looks to small for the size of the head. Also maybe it was not given as much attention as the face. The left side bottom robe area seems a bit under worked as well. I understand that the background fades in a bit there but to me it seems like it needs something. Looking as a digital image and seeing the real thing are completely different. I looked at the comments below and noticed that nobody has given you a real critique, or maybe you just don't post them. Anyway people can find things wrong in anybody's work if they would just say what they are really thinking about someones art. I think you have done a great job with this work and i will enjoy looking at your others.
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bzyq2 Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2014
pastel its a joke right?:P
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watchlines Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2013
tu trabajo es una inspiracion.
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Blacleria Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
I have featured your work in my journal, I hope you don't mind :aww: ~~> [link]
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ladyalita Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
You show such wonderful skill with pastel. I mostly enjoy his face. Such an array of details, values, and textures. I like how other parts have less detail, makes his wonderful face the main focus.


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My heart: [link]
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mburleigh8 Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Outstanding!
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mvartist Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013
treborhtiek is correct it need some visual info on the left side since it doesn't match the right side. either drop the tonal ranges to the right or put tonal ranges to the left.
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mvartist Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013
YES proportion of the hand is 20% smaller. also not enough details in tonal variation are placed on it. I know hand is secondary to the face, but it need visual info. You can De-emphasize it by loosening the render OR blur it out a bit. but it needs highlight and darks.
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CorradoCandido Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013
Technic perfect
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SoulSiren Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013
WOW
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